2014년 9월 28일 일요일

week6 Introduction


Introduction


How can human live until 100 years old or more, and survive without being existed? Of course there are a lot of factors that makes people live constantly such as technology, science, inventions, however, among them, language is one of the important invention that people made. We do not know exactly when people started to make language, but many myths are related to survival of humans- to communicate each other, to hunt, to show it is dangerous, or to require help. To express these situation and to survive, they need language and society. People have made language since being homo sapiens, after many changes about 7000 languages are made in different country. These languages are made by human thought, so we can make a large number of words. However, there is a paradoxical problem between 'we make languages with our thought' and 'we express our thought with language.' Which is first?  We have to think with language but if there is no exact word to express that thought, can you really sure that you are thinking now? To prove that we are thinking, we should make language continuously and the language should be common in that country which have their own language. Language is the best tool to survive and make society rather than any other things.


1. attention grabber-
I ask a interesting question that people can feel curious. I expressed language as invention of people. I also refer reason of survival of people
2. explains the topic
I said that for survival, the language is needed. The number of languages and the paradoxical problem of the language can be good example of supporting the topic
3.My thesis
My topic was language can determine human thought, but I want to write more extensively,so I changed my topic. Language is the best tool to survive and make society rather than any other things.

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  1. Mock research grade:

    2 points The research is inadequate.

    Rationale:

    Your research is not presented in the way I asked. Also, most of your "notes" are just copy and pasted from the source. You need to take the information and put it in your own words for two reasons. 1) It will be more useful to you that way. 2) I will know you explored the material.

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