1. The introduction, which warms up the audience, establishes goodwill and rapport with the readers, and announces the general theme or thesis of the argument.
There is origin of the language.The Bible indicates that there were two distinct miraculous events: the original creation of Adam as a talking and understanding being; and the subsequent division of humanity into language groups as a judgment on the rebellion of the descendants of Noah. This show that human had made language for some purposes. Now I'll tell you about some examples about absence of the language, roles of language, why the language is necessary for thinking.
2. The narration, which summarizes relevant background material, provides any information the audience needs to know about the environment and circumstances that produce the argument, and set up the stakes-what’s at risk in this question. In academic writing, this often takes the form of a literature review
Among 230 countries in the world, 3,000 to 4,000 languages are in existence. There are
various languages and each single is very unique. These languages are used when we
speak, write, read, are living. Language is very important for our lives. If there is no
language, we will not be able to speak, write, read, study, maybe we can't do anything and just move, eat, and sleep over and over again. We can think, but can't communicate each other. Isn't is boring, and is that true life which we want to live? I don't think so. People feel happy when they express their thoughts and share their opinion. In this point, language is necessary for human mind and life. I think that language determines and limits human thought.
3. The confirmation,which lays out in a logical order (usually strongest to weakest or most obvious to most subtle) the claims that support the thesis, providing evidence for each claim.
"We think in words. The more words you know, the more thoughts you can have." We can express our thinking through language and we also are making the language through thinking. But if there is no word that I want to express, I can think but I cannot prove what I am thinking. For example, if there was no word 'happy', how can you express that feeling? Just by smiling, we can't understand what the person who do that want to say. We also can't know why and how much they are happy without words.There is another example, my mother have bad memory so sometimes she asks of me "what I wanted to do? why am I here?". I am embarrassed when she say like that, because I don't know her thought and she didn't say what she will do to me.
If you've studied a foreign language, you may have learned that no two languages describe or conceptualize the world in exactly the same way. Each language possesses a hidden history of the culture and place in which it originated and those elements do not precisely translate into another language or mindset, only an approximation. An example of this is that the Eskimo language, because of the frozen environment where it originated, has many different words for snow that describes whether it is wet, dry, blowing, heavy, light, etc. while in English we have only one word for it. There is similar example about that. Tzeltal speakers, whose language does not have words for “right” or “left”, were blindfolded, spun in a chair and then asked to retrieve a coin that had been in one of two boxes. Their performance was the same both when boxes were placed on the floor (a geocentric reference) and when the boxes were placed on the end of a beam that was attached to the chair (an egocentric reference). Like this, many countries have various languages, so there are some words that do not exist in some countries and exist in other countries. We can see this, it is just because languages and places where they live in are different, but if we see this closely, they can know with eyes but can't express that words in their languages.
As a communication tool, language's basic adaptive function is to help communicators pass information from one generation to another, thus enriching cultural heritage, which, in turn, further develops language and the user's understanding of the world (world schema).
One of the essential properties of language is that it can multiply and generate an endless number of meanings despite its limited rules. This property is called infinite generativity. Not only does language allow us to create new ideas, it also helps us assign names to these ideas, thereby facilitating and smoother memory encoding process. language could form part or even majority of our declarative memory, or that component of our long-term memory that comprise ideas and information that can be verbally communicated.
4. The refutation and concession, which looks at opposing viewpoints to the writer’s claims, anticipating objections from the audience, and allowing as much of the opposing viewpoints as possible without weakening the thesis.
People can think without language. Disabled people who can't speak can't talk with their language. They can only express their thinking by their bodies. It is difficult to understand if normal people see that sign. But the amazing thing is that those sign and gesture is called 'sign language'. It is also language even though they do body language, because the language is limited, they can understand what that sign means and what they want to say and what they are thinking now.
5. The summation, which provides a strong conclusion, amplifying the force of the argument, and showing the readers that this solution is the best at meeting the circumstances.
If there is no language, we will not able to do anything. We are human who have brain, can think, and create languages. But still we can not perfectly express our thinking and feeling directly. Even though we make the word, it takes long time to all people who use that language know that word. However, because of limitation of languages or linguistic determinism, people can understand, communicate, and talk each other in that country. They share their own, common language. I think that language control and do important role in human thoughts.
This isn't a first draft, this is more like your outline - Make sure you're labeling these correctly.
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