week 11 self evaluation

Self Evaluation Template

1) What score do you think you deserve? Here is the rubric:

2 points - The first draft is thoughtful and a good start to an effective persuasive essay. It demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument.

1 point - The student completes a first draft that demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument

0 points - The first draft is inadequate

I think my score is 1 point, because I think my confirmation is not complete and little cluttered.

2) What did you do well?
I think my introduction and narration is interesting, many researches are included, the topic is what people can easily sympathize. 

arguments are based off of opinions and personal feelings.
3) What could you have done better?

 I found a lot of information and researches that can support my opinion, and I always thought how can I make readers understand when they read my writing. I think chose my topic well, so I could think deeply.
4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?

I write my narration well, I think I used many researches and it can be a good foundation to support my opinion.
5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?

I think my conclusion is weak. I just summarized briefly, and there's no strong or impressing ending.

6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better?

I think I should write my conclusion again, and I should make it more completely. Also I should elaborate my confirmation part. I should check grammar error or spelling. I should change the world so that readers can understand more easier. Also, I should complement refutation.